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A Nice Little Extract

# 25377

It's the a bit of the "novel" that I am writing, which is at the moment, seven pages long... but I'll get there! I thought this was sweet.

“So… You like her?” Hallie asked after a long silence.
“Yeah… I guess.” Lee answered quietly. Hallie looked up at him. He stared at her pillows, pretending not to notice the slight disappointment in her eyes.
“Why?” She asked rather bluntly. Lee looked down at her, surprised with her rude tone. Hallie knew she had said the wrong thing, and ignored his gaze.
“I…I don’t know.” He stammered, looking back at the pillows. Again there was a silence.
“I think I should get home.” He says, getting off the bed.
“Yeah. Okay.”
They walked out to the hall and out the door. Pausing awkwardly for a moment, Hallie hugged him, and Lee gave her a quick peck on the cheek. Both smiled shyly as Lee walks down the path and back up the street, now launched into darkness.

Lee understood why Hallie had been so rude to him this afternoon.

She liked him.

A car came up behind him as he approached his house. It beat him to the driveway. His mother got out and stood at the door while she waited for her son to walk up. Together they went inside and had a cup of tea before bed.

I'm once again trying to get used to using past tense instead of present tense (from all the script writing) so sorry if it's a bit dodgy.

Dry Your Eyes Mate

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# 25322

Dry your eyes mate
I know it’s hard to take but her mind has been made up
There’s plenty more fish in the sea
Dry your eyes mate
I know you want to make her see how much this pain hurts
But you’ve got to walk away now
It’s over
~ The Streets, Dry Your Eyes

These people are soo cool.. but I soo hate this song. Go and read all the lyrics and you might understand. This is EXACTLY what I did to him... I don't know... I've listened to it a total of one and a half times... and I can't stand it. It's kind of freaky... but that could very well just be me.

Shit... I feel bad...

Gone.

# 25292

Ignore the voices in your head and look out to the sea.

It sparkles in the moonlight and jumps up at the walls of rock surrounding it.
Keeping it caged.
Caged like animals in the zoo.
Helpless. Trapped.
But the sea.
The sea is not helpless.
The sea is not trapped.
The sea is strong and powerful
Filling large crevices of the world.
The sea takes over.
Like you take over.

You take over my life.
My world.
My identity.
Stealing me.
Claiming me for your own.

You hold me tight.
You don't let go.
I struggle.
Still you don't let go.
I scream.
Still you don't let go.
I lash out with anger.
Fear.
You shrink back and slowly disappear.

Gone.

Study break

# 25192

A little well earned procrastination. It's a doosy this one. Just a long improvisation. Have fun.

Lights flicker on and off
But there's no one in the room
Straining to see
Stretching to reach
Circling the premesis
As the light burns out

Looking down the endless street
Till too dark to see
Pushing through prickly bush
Till you start to bleed

Searching down the empty street
In dustbins, parks, and petrol stations
Not a sign
No Direction
Just a dodgy photograph

Feet blister
Hands freeze
No closer
No further

The temptation grows stronger
The temptation to turn and run

Keep searching through the empty fields
Over mountains, under bridges.
Days pass like the flowing stream
Hunger overtakes you

Finally give up
Finally turn around
Reluctantly.

Jumps at you unexpectantly
While laying on the ground
Her skin pale
Her limbs, limp
Not a movement, not a breath

Emptiness.
Nothingness.
You're reason has gone
Just like that
You are no more.

Molto Stressato!

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# 25110

Today I went through four whole hours of Italian. It gets me thinking.. how on earth would italians be able to stand it!! I mean... it's sooo hard to keep up with..

che cosa fai?

faccio studio!

che cosa studio?

sono studio biologia, inglese, drammatica (according to the dictionary.. but my teacher says differently)matematica, historia e italiano. Sono stressatissimo! (excuse my spelling)

Ok. that's enough trying to be italian. If you didn't understand any of it, it basically said:

what are you doing?

studying

what are you studying?

i study bio, english, drama, maths, history and italian.

If someone would like to argue against that, please do correct my istakes, i need a lot of that.

Something A Little Different.

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# 25027

You will often find that change is a good thing. No rhyming, free verse-ish. Enjoy.

They won't notice if you're hiding
In dark corners of the night.
Though you seem to light a fire
With your eyes.
You're anticipating action
You can feel their rusty blades
Do you dare to make a sound?
Or will they strike?
You can see them creeping over
You can hear them russel leaves
You feel their rusty metal
Pierce your skin.

Oh the horror
The sheer horror
Of the strangers in the night.
Though you knew
That they were coming,
Looking for you through the night.

Oh the pain
The sheer pain
That these rusty blades will bring.
But no blood
Not one drop
Will your dried up body shed.

They loose interest and move on
From the darkness of your cave
Leaving you alone, not expected
To survive.
They sail off on ships of bronze
While your firey eyes at rest
You can hear their evil cackles
far away.
They don't make it to the shore
No, they sink to bottom blue
So no gold for these strangers
Of the night.

This post was edited by kaizley on Aug 04, 2004.


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