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Jul 04, 2004 10:51 # 23995

majic *** is unsure about...

Well here I go again

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Where is the delete button? Haha!

This post was edited by majic on Sep 05, 2011.

Jul 04, 2004 11:07 # 23997

MelMel *** replies...

Re: Well here I go again

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That's what i've been waiting for from you. i do love your writing.

question: is it a poem or a song? it looks like it could lend itself very well to being put to music...

I'm nice, I have things to offer

i couldn't have said it better myself. hang in there... 2.5 months to go...

-Mel

Look at me! I'm a prostitute robot from the future!

Jul 04, 2004 11:27 # 23998

majic *** smiles...

Re: Well here I go again

question: is it a poem or a song? it looks like it could lend itself very well to being put to music...

Well as a matter of fact. I met this guy in Hawaii that is my mom's boyfriend. He is into music and is very very very much like me. We have tons of things in common and we love to play music very much. I've been flirting with writing songs but have not been able to figure out the formula so to speak. This is my first attempt at anything remotely close to a song. I have the desire but putting it to the test is another thing entirely.

Thank you for the kind words!

Jul 04, 2004 11:48 # 24000

majic *** smiles...

Re: Well here I go again

Oops I left proof of my existance on paper again and here is what it said... I love writing and I'm going to be giving my honest effort at trying to write songs for the foreseable future. Deep down I should have persued music... Wait, it's never too late to persue music....... =)

I'm overshadowed this time
from the things that should have been
I can see it all in front of me
but can't seem to make ammends

I'm sure I know what to do
I'm smart enough to know
If you saw me in the streets
you'd think I was the show

these days are going by so fast
I barely can comprehend
the manner inwhich I live my life
is a confusing sort of blend

I'm sure I know what I am
I'm smart enough to know
If you saw me in the streets
you'd think I was the show

I'm scared of failing and falling down
from this pedistal I'm suppose to be
from the spot up in the clouds
that was made for only me

if you see me on the streets
I'd be glad to tell you hi
because I need the extra push
to help make me fly

Hope you liked it. I'd be open to any advice you can give me. I haven't the foggiest idea at how to write good lyrics.


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