Reading majic's journal

Last night while under the influence of life I happened to stumble on this particular free verse lying deep within the bowels of myself. This writing is somewhat of a rollercoaster, it reads faster in some areas and seems to build up in others. Have fun, see if you can pick out the rhythm.

my thoughts are cloudy
somewhat ablaze
a twisting turning
sort of maze
a drink here
a drink over there
I can feel the buzz
of life
pinch me
touch me
tell me I'm real
let me know this
is the fucking deal
am I'm suppose to feel this good
when I'm alone
and not with you
I doubt it
but this is how
I spend my
time
writing
creating
needing
longing
suffering
urging
yearning
I can hang on
I'm strong
I am me
all along
I can do more
than people credit
I can do more
than I merit
I have blood
I have tears
I have all
that steers
my soul in a direction
with an endless bound
a mystic melody
with a forgiving sound
listen to me
listen well
I am more
than I
will ever
tell
...

Wow...

"I'm free to say whatever I, whatever I like if it's wrong or right, it's alright."

That's good stuff. I wish I were more creative with words. I have lots of songs with no lyrics.

Well that wasn't a song per se. Maybe it could be one but I dunno. Thanks for the compliment.