Reading majic's journal

This is yet another poem. I love writing titles to my work that stretch the engligh language and I also like to write thought provoking pieces that try to get the reader to figure out what it means to him. I've been working on this one a while and I just finished it up tonight.

This poem is entitled "There Is This Something Wonderful"

There is this something wonderful,
	something extrodinary and tangible,
a crazy sort of unexplainable,
	thats sometimes felt as unattainable,
its gravity pulls and is unmistakeable
	to a special place called remarkable, 
the feelings felt are so sensational,
	so unimaginable and irresistible,
so undeniable and susceptible,
	so incredibly audible and sensible,
that life without is not possible,
	this place is almost not plausible,
comprehensible or thinkable,
	a dream can make it physical,
touchable and corporeal,
	where desirable sensations are so sensual,
so verbal, so intentional,
	that your mind makes it all believable,
palatable and excitable,
	where euphoric vibrations are congenital,
habitual and soluble,
	love and mind are inseparable,
compoundable and emotional,
	to be without this would be unfathomable,
unquestionable and abysmal,
	only your mind can it permissable,
possible and visible,
	and only you can make it credible,
uncontrovertable and definable,

It's all about what you see and feel,
	
Tell me how you feel?

I love the use of words ending in ible, al and able. I love the flow but have been working on this so long that I figured I needed to get an ending to it. I hope you like it.

I like the rhythm this poem has.

And I must say this is the first poem I've seen that keeps me interested, even though there are no nouns in it.

Please contiune to vote AND post.

there are no nouns in it

Yep it describes something in alot of detail without naming that something. It means exactly whatever you want it to! Haha...

This is beautiful. Keep writing poetry, it does your heart justice.

Ah what sweet words that flow from the heart and mind, and sing of the spirit of the writer.
To touch the eyes and so the spirit, soul and heart of the reader is a gift that no man can distroy.

Thank you for a wonderful work. :)

It only looks that way because your standing on your head.

Thank you for a wonderful work. :)

Your welcome and thank you! I'll definitely keep writing GOD willing! I have a deep desire to write but mostly can't figure out how to get started. I have finally had a creative spark and have posted yet another poem. Will see how things go from here...